Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Almost Perfect

My cookie is too chocolatey, it’s got one chip too many.
My piggy bank’s too fat because it has an extra penny.
My snowman has one extra coal-black button on his front,
And I could do with one less clue in every treasure-hunt.
I love my freckles, all except the third one from the right.
And don’t you feel there’s one too many stars out in the night?
I like this poem pretty well, I hope you think it’s fine.
But, I don’t know, it might be better with just one less line.
That would be perfect.


  1. Don't change a thing. Wink. It wants to keep it's asymmetrical charm.

  2. Hehehe! It's perfect just the way it is!