My piggy bank’s too fat because it has an extra penny.
My snowman has one extra coal-black button on his front,
And I could do with one less clue in every treasure-hunt.
I love my freckles, all except the third one from the right.
And don’t you feel there’s one too many stars out in the night?
I like this poem pretty well, I hope you think it’s fine.
But, I don’t know, it might be better with just one less line.
That would be perfect.
Don't change a thing. Wink. It wants to keep it's asymmetrical charm.
ReplyDeleteHehehe! It's perfect just the way it is!
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